Day One
Uploaded on Nov 01, 2007 / 30 views / 217 impressions / 22 comments
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2k in I'm feeling awkward around my main character, wrestling with POV, and killing people's mothers. Oh and gushing about stars. I like stars.
30 comments
2. gamwyn 1:17
so many more deaths to go...
3. miserere 0:07
Good at breaking the 2000 mark on day one!
4. mslizzybella 0:24
I feel the SAME way! It is just so weird. Last year I felt like I was one with my characters, this year its like they are my neigbors. SO FRUSTRATING!
gamwyn
It is frustrating!!!
5. mslizzybella 2:08
Oh there WILL be rocking. Total rocking.
On a tangent, you doing write in's this year?
gamwyn
Yes! There are actually several different write-ins planned. Tuesday at Borders from 6 to whenever, Wednesday at the Starbucks across the street from Desert Ridge (so Tatum and the 101) at 6 to whenever, and Saturdays at the same Starbucks from 2 to 6 I think we said, starting the 3rd.
6. Saeth 1:10
I had my MC get beaten up by her mother for trying to save someone's life. I understand how you feel.
7. Saeth 0:58
*HUGS*
8. HisDisciple 1:31
I love stars!
9. HisDisciple 1:43
If you need to laugh, go outside and play Stars. You point at a star, and while you're looking at it, you spin around until you fall down. It's great fun :D Especially if you're playing with other people.
gamwyn
hahahahaha that sounds hilarious
10. justjason 1:37
I remember when I used to see the stars. Now I ust see the lights from a big shopping center. I'd give anything to see the stars again.
11. Patricius 0:36
I know exactaly how you feel! I having a little trouble getting his voice to sound like his own instead of mine. ...I had to chose narritive, didn't I?
12. Patricius 1:26
2k of emo goodness? Kazah!
gamwyn
haha
13. Ape-X 1:56
Best wishes!
14. Ikasu 0:49
ew... first person..
ew... present tense.
Anyway, if you dont necessarily NEED the reader to know the main character, don't hesitate to change tense/point of view in the next chapter.
Everything's going to be okay!
gamwyn
ew is right. And thank you for your reassurances. :-)
15. Ikasu 1:20
Don't let the morgue overflow ;)
gamwyn
No promises on that one...
16. Ikasu 1:47
Did you know...
that words like "consider" come from the latin word for star - sidus?
the more you know *shooting star*
gamwyn
I did not know that. Cool.
17. brandice 0:07
Good job!!! :)
18. Magda-Christy 0:08
good work!
19. frecklesazure 0:36
I have that green purse on your door, except in blue
gamwyn
haha nice!!
20. Kaedtiann
Yay, good job! And ugh, I don't know my characters at all, but it hasn't bothered me too much yet, since we've just started.
21. mariokluser 1:59
Have fun!!!
22. AlmostEmerson 1:08
That probably wouldn't help with the sad and depressed thing. *hugs*
1. gamwyn 1:05
killed her mother