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I'm trying to re-cut/re-edit/re-imagine "traction", my first short film.
I know there are a lot of things beyond fixing, like the shitty/uninteresting camera angles and lighting (or lack of it).
I want to try and improve the look (color...

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I'm trying to re-cut/re-edit/re-imagine "traction", my first short film.
I know there are a lot of things beyond fixing, like the shitty/uninteresting camera angles and lighting (or lack of it).
I want to try and improve the look (color correcting), editing, and sound.
Not so much fixing the sound as removing it totally and replacing it with a random voice over, and subtitles that tell the actual story.
This is a sample cut from what will become the entire 7 minute short film. I don't know, could be shorter, but the original was 7 minutes.
What do you think of the sample?
PS: The subtitle here was random. I haven' actually written the script for the voice-over yet.

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