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nicoledot... (0:10)
4 months ago 0 + -How could you make this statement with more professional language?
nicoledot... (0:30)
4 months ago 0 + -Very interesting stats!
nicoledot... (1:23)
4 months ago 0 + -"Only" for second hand smokers?! Make sure your word choice is accurate because it can affect the meaning of your arguments.
nicoledot... (2:09)
4 months ago 0 + -These people are choosing to be in a bar where they know it will be smoky. A more convincing picture could have shown someone in line at the grocery store, or at a hotel where they need to be, and where others' actions affect them with no choice to leave.
nicoledot... (3:06)
4 months ago 0 + -Bar again...
nicoledot... (3:25)
4 months ago 0 + -The text on this slide needs to explain the picture. You have no stats about brain activity, just lung cancer and heart disease.
nicoledot... (9:41)
4 months ago 0 + -Dont add new info after you begin your conclusion!