Viddler

I like the graphic and titles along with the sound. The squeking did hurt my ears a little. You might consider more of a softer nature sound.

I like the voice continuation as the picture of big foot is shown.

Nice use of the dissolve feature.

This sound is easier on the ears. Nice story line.

This must have been hard to piece together. Maybe you could have cut the scene with the door opening earlier to make it more of a smooth transition.

I tussled with these two scenes. I reversed them after originally having them ordered like you do. I am probably splitting hairs, but having them the otherway gives the impression that they are walking past the camera position, instead of two different cameras.

I reallly like the use of the graphic. Try to reaize or add a background to take away the black side bars. I also like the zoom effect.

Same comment on these still shots.

This is a very good effect. It is these fine details that makes your video stand out amongst the others.

Natalie, I really like your version of the video. Good story, editing and ending. I only mentioned a few items as "polish" on a very good video.

nice cut away!

pretty good cutting innhere. It feels chopped up, but is still working for me.

great use of cutaway again to go along with audio track, and give you oppotunities to cut audio.

Ouch! I would have tried to find a little earlier place to cut and not include the other guy.

Like the graphic too. Again with cut aways you can go to town editing up the audio all you want to get it right.

Nice campfire sounds to add to the natural environmental noises.

Louise

Good credits!

Louise