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15 views • Uploaded April 18, 2008

I like the donut! and the coffee and cigarette. a connection.. how intriguing!

Thanks god, I thought it would be so cliche. I canceld some cigarettes b.t.w. In my books they are smoking a lot. Maybe to much for non-smokers (lol)

*SUPER BIG HUGS!!!* *runs off to get disinfectant* :)

lol Seriously, though, I'm in awe of you. You're writing this in a language that's not your first, and you're doing it SO well!

I'm going back and forth between being engrossed in your script and being hypnotized by your monitor. :)

Awesome to talk about this gross stuff while someone eats. :)

How ominous! Great line! "Not enough victims." Such a creepy thing to think about!

I think you can probably just say that there's tension between them, and then let the director and actors sort out the way to play that. I was able to imagine their tension, but I'm sure it's much more descriptive in the novel.

sorry you're sick! Everybody's sick!!! :-( Get better soon!

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