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greensong — Fri, 09 Nov 2007 04:17:29 GMT

greensong posted a comment (1:30):

Ooo, you should make it ambiguous so that the reader can decide how it ends!

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greensong — Fri, 09 Nov 2007 04:16:03 GMT

greensong posted a comment (0:26):

That's awesome!

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Dreamgirls — Mon, 29 Oct 2007 03:37:31 GMT

Dreamgirls posted a comment (2:31):

I love the personality in this young woman! What a great character trait.

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Dreamgirls — Mon, 29 Oct 2007 03:35:35 GMT

Dreamgirls posted a comment (1:27):

Very cool. You can have some interesting structure of your novel with that concept. I love it!

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Dreamgirls — Mon, 29 Oct 2007 03:33:38 GMT

Dreamgirls posted a comment (0:26):

Wow, I love that!

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Ape-X — Sun, 28 Oct 2007 16:29:06 GMT

Ape-X posted a comment (2:39):

LOL. That's great!

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Ape-X — Sun, 28 Oct 2007 16:27:58 GMT

Ape-X posted a comment (1:41):

I hear that.

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Patricius — Sun, 28 Oct 2007 14:28:05 GMT

Patricius posted a comment (2:55):

Hmmm... that totally gets me curious about her. Why does she do that, why only with the bike, why, why, why? Great hook.

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Patricius — Sun, 28 Oct 2007 14:25:08 GMT

Patricius posted a comment (0:58):

That is a really cool idea. I love that.

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Patricius — Sun, 28 Oct 2007 14:24:13 GMT

Patricius posted a comment (0:20):

Join the club.

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Patricius — Sun, 28 Oct 2007 14:23:44 GMT

Patricius posted a comment (0:13):

Awesome!

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SaintJoi — Sun, 28 Oct 2007 14:16:06 GMT

SaintJoi posted a comment (3:47):

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SaintJoi — Sun, 28 Oct 2007 14:12:23 GMT

SaintJoi posted a comment (2:33):

I like that. It really seems to say something about the character

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SaintJoi — Sun, 28 Oct 2007 14:10:11 GMT

SaintJoi posted a comment (0:39):

intriguing....

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SaintJoi — Sun, 28 Oct 2007 14:09:24 GMT

SaintJoi posted a comment (0:07):

Yay!

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faesutherland — Sun, 28 Oct 2007 13:07:14 GMT

faesutherland posted a comment (2:44):

Yay for lots of pink!

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faesutherland — Sun, 28 Oct 2007 13:05:31 GMT

faesutherland posted a comment (1:13):

Oh that's an awesome concept. Very interesting!

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faesutherland — Sun, 28 Oct 2007 13:04:17 GMT

faesutherland posted a comment (0:20):

Woohoo, way to bring it down to the wire, Jason! LOL.

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HisDisciple — Sun, 28 Oct 2007 11:54:11 GMT

HisDisciple posted a comment (0:07):

Yay!

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Magda-Christy — Sun, 28 Oct 2007 09:17:18 GMT

Magda-Christy posted a comment (0:0-1):

Awh, I'm so happy you had an "author's epiphany." They are always just so satisfying, stress relieving and stress reducing. Congrats on that, and I really can't wait to hear what happens between your two MCs.

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Magda-Christy — Sun, 28 Oct 2007 09:15:34 GMT

Magda-Christy posted a comment (3:15):

hehe, she sounds awesome!

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Magda-Christy — Sun, 28 Oct 2007 09:14:00 GMT

Magda-Christy posted a comment (1:50):

Dude -- it was the weirdest thing. I was at a party tonight, and someone, for some reason, mentioned cataracts, and I immediatly thought of you ^_^

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Magda-Christy — Sun, 28 Oct 2007 09:12:42 GMT

Magda-Christy posted a comment (1:23):

Awh, that's so cool and sweet! I can't wait to hear more about them ^_^

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Magda-Christy — Sun, 28 Oct 2007 09:11:24 GMT

Magda-Christy posted a comment (0:27):

OoO, I really like that.

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Magda-Christy — Sun, 28 Oct 2007 09:11:05 GMT

Magda-Christy posted a comment (0:16):

Man, seriously, there is nothing better than that moment of "everything clicking together." It's just so deeply satisfying on so many different levels. It also really helps to give a HUGE boost to the enthusiasm levels ^_^

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Magda-Christy — Sun, 28 Oct 2007 09:09:56 GMT

Magda-Christy posted a comment (0:09):

YAY! Congrats!!!