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2k in I'm feeling awkward around my main character, wrestling with POV, and killing people's mothers. Oh and gushing about stars. I like stars.
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gamwyn (1:05)
2 years ago 0 + -killed her mother
gamwyn (1:17)
2 years ago 0 + -so many more deaths to go...
miserere (0:07)
2 years ago 0 + -Good at breaking the 2000 mark on day one!
mslizzyb... (0:24)
2 years ago 0 + -I feel the SAME way! It is just so weird. Last year I felt like I was one with my characters, this year its like they are my neigbors. SO FRUSTRATING!
gamwyn (0:24)
2 years ago 0 + -It is frustrating!!!
mslizzyb... (2:08)
2 years ago 0 + -Oh there WILL be rocking. Total rocking.
On a tangent, you doing write in's this year?
gamwyn (2:08)
2 years ago 0 + -Yes! There are actually several different write-ins planned. Tuesday at Borders from 6 to whenever, Wednesday at the Starbucks across the street from Desert Ridge (so Tatum and the 101) at 6 to whenever, and Saturdays at the same Starbucks from 2 to 6 I think we said, starting the 3rd.
Saeth (1:10)
2 years ago 0 + -I had my MC get beaten up by her mother for trying to save someone's life. I understand how you feel.
Saeth (0:58)
2 years ago 0 + -*HUGS*
HisDisciple (1:31)
2 years ago 0 + -I love stars!
HisDisciple (1:43)
2 years ago 0 + -If you need to laugh, go outside and play Stars. You point at a star, and while you're looking at it, you spin around until you fall down. It's great fun :D Especially if you're playing with other people.
gamwyn (1:43)
2 years ago 0 + -hahahahaha that sounds hilarious
justjason (1:37)
2 years ago 0 + -I remember when I used to see the stars. Now I ust see the lights from a big shopping center. I'd give anything to see the stars again.
Patricius (0:36)
2 years ago 0 + -I know exactaly how you feel! I having a little trouble getting his voice to sound like his own instead of mine. ...I had to chose narritive, didn't I?
Patricius (1:26)
2 years ago 0 + -2k of emo goodness? Kazah!
gamwyn (1:26)
2 years ago 0 + -haha
Ape-X (1:56)
2 years ago 0 + -Best wishes!
Ikasu (0:49)
2 years ago 0 + -ew... first person..
ew... present tense.
Anyway, if you dont necessarily NEED the reader to know the main character, don't hesitate to change tense/point of view in the next chapter.
Everything's going to be okay!
gamwyn (0:49)
2 years ago 0 + -ew is right. And thank you for your reassurances. :-)
Ikasu (1:20)
2 years ago 0 + -Don't let the morgue overflow ;)
gamwyn (1:20)
2 years ago 0 + -No promises on that one...
Ikasu (1:47)
2 years ago 0 + -Did you know...
that words like "consider" come from the latin word for star - sidus?
the more you know *shooting star*
gamwyn (1:47)
2 years ago 0 + -I did not know that. Cool.
brandice (0:07)
2 years ago 0 + -Good job!!! :)
Magda-Chr... (0:08)
2 years ago 0 + -good work!
frecklesa... (0:36)
2 years ago 0 + -I have that green purse on your door, except in blue
gamwyn (0:36)
2 years ago 0 + -haha nice!!
Kaedtiann
2 years ago 0 + -Yay, good job! And ugh, I don't know my characters at all, but it hasn't bothered me too much yet, since we've just started.
marioklu... (1:59)
2 years ago 0 + -Have fun!!!
AlmostEm... (1:08)
2 years ago 0 + -That probably wouldn't help with the sad and depressed thing. *hugs*