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Sorry for the length of this peice. This is my commentary on Joi's A Million Sunsets, so if you're planning on reading it and haven't gotten through page 33 yet, don't watch this.
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SaintJoi (0:02)
7 months ago 0 + -eeeeek!!! nervous!!!!
SaintJoi (1:15)
7 months ago 0 + -yay!
SaintJoi (2:19)
7 months ago 0 + -yeah....poor Ledan...I might end up changing her name, due to later developments...
SaintJoi (3:59)
7 months ago 0 + -mmm, good point. It's a pretty simple octagonal marble slab. *makes note to go back and add*
SaintJoi (4:56)
7 months ago 0 + -yeah, some connecting scenes are missing. I always have to go back and add stuff. SIGH.
SaintJoi (5:42)
7 months ago 0 + -Ugh, I'm not that hot at doing relationships...but the whole stinkin' book is about relationships, so I guess I should... :)
SaintJoi (6:14)
7 months ago 0 + -no, she's definately alone, but you're right, that needs to be set up better.
SaintJoi (6:57)
7 months ago 0 + -wait till you see her in other lifetimes! She ended up being, on one interpretation, the main character.
SaintJoi (7:16)
7 months ago 0 + -I'm just about to get to the scene that echoes that one. But this time, Mario, Nathanael, and Kaedtiann are all there, too!
SaintJoi (7:50)
7 months ago 0 + -yes, very definately. It becomes more important at the end of the story.
SaintJoi (8:24)
7 months ago 0 + -ok, good, I have a lot more I can put in there. I just can't tell when I'm focusing too much on side issues! Don't want to bore people.
SaintJoi (10:12)
7 months ago 0 + -I'll take a look at it in editing. I can probably rearrange some things.
SaintJoi (11:28)
7 months ago 0 + -PLEASE do!!
SaintJoi (11:53)
7 months ago 0 + -yeah. I know I've been reusing words too often, but that's something I always correct in editing later. :)
SaintJoi (12:18)
7 months ago 0 + -and the other pages, when I get them uploaded....heh.