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A Million Sunsets Commentary 1 (pp 1-33) Favorite

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34 views • Uploaded December 6, 2007

yeah....poor Ledan...I might end up changing her name, due to later developments...

mmm, good point. It's a pretty simple octagonal marble slab. *makes note to go back and add*

yeah, some connecting scenes are missing. I always have to go back and add stuff. SIGH.

Ugh, I'm not that hot at doing relationships...but the whole stinkin' book is about relationships, so I guess I should... :)

no, she's definately alone, but you're right, that needs to be set up better.

wait till you see her in other lifetimes! She ended up being, on one interpretation, the main character.

I'm just about to get to the scene that echoes that one. But this time, Mario, Nathanael, and Kaedtiann are all there, too!

yes, very definately. It becomes more important at the end of the story.

ok, good, I have a lot more I can put in there. I just can't tell when I'm focusing too much on side issues! Don't want to bore people.

I'll take a look at it in editing. I can probably rearrange some things.

yeah. I know I've been reusing words too often, but that's something I always correct in editing later. :)

and the other pages, when I get them uploaded....heh.

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